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Awake on strong, black coffee drinks
Words on paper, liquid ink
Dreams of pen tips, future lies
Tragic stories, quotes of the wise
Nights have carved their dark, deep valleys
In the hollows of my eyes

For you see, my friend, when writers cry
There are no tears, their cheeks are dry
But ink dipped fingers, worn out wrists
Chewed up nails and bloody fists

You see, it's strange when writers cry
Their hearts are true, their words don’t lie
They mourn in silence for a few days
Of paper cuts and tear-less haze

Of coffee mugs and smoky paper
Liquid spills, and water vapor
Sorry dreams and wasted hours
Putrid smells and dying flowers

(Torn to pieces from inside
Tears are hidden by our pride)
...........................please add a comment and i hope you like it :)...............
(its been a while since i wrote a poem that rhymes)

........edit!!...........
oh my god this is the first piece i post that reaches 200 comments im so happy...yay!
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nickie101 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
omg this is amazing
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
That's us. Miserable, misunderstood but still eager to write our problems away.
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TheLaughingDreamer Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Harimau98 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student General Artist
The best works of art, ore ones that you can feel the emotion from.
Emotion, the essence of art, without it, it will be nothing, not even a blank canvas, just... nothing. You have done a great job of not just showing this by your story, but your tone as well, this is truly something to tresure.
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CatfoodPhotography Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is beautiful. Very well done. ^_^
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Onyxpaint Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
true dat :T
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hdsmoot Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   Photographer
As a writer this is so accurate and true the words on the page reveal the tears that never fell
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TheLaughingDreamer Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thank you
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hdsmoot Featured By Owner May 29, 2013   Photographer
Your Welcome :)
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666Nando666 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As a fellow writer, this is true.
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