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She lay beneath the sun's searing flare
Her blood dripping
Into the silver river
Running down her cheeks
And through her hair
"Goodbye," she told the world

Once, this girl was a wealthy princess
Once she was too precious and priceless
Once, she wore the most beautiful dresses
She danced in balls of golden floors

They say the princess made a horrible deal
A deal with the demon of the gold and steel
They say the demon would give her a wheel
Of gold and diamonds if she let him "heal"
Her poor tired soul

The princess agreed for the wheel was tempting
In a matter of seconds her soul was empty
And the demon took over and was now attempting
To rule the whole kingdom and run it his way

The kingdom was corrupted, turned upside-down
And the king was murdered right beneath his crown
And the farmer was homeless and the doctor a clown
And the people rebelling, destroying each town
So they hunted the princess then left her to drown

Now the demon believed that his princess was useless
So he left her by the river, lonely and helpless
And there lay the princess
Broken and lifeless
She let out her last breath
In the bloody sundown
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just trying to turn a story into a poem (again)
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Mood: Amazed ~Aku-yume Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! :D I could literally picture it in my mind.
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~TheLaughingDreamer Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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~Moleboi Dec 28, 2012  Professional Writer
moral of the tale: beware of those bearing gifts
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~TheLaughingDreamer Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol but maybe
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Mood: Love ~Norners Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I love it :D
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~TheLaughingDreamer Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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~Norners Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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Mood: Love ~TiggiFrech Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is particularly amazing! Well done on the story/poem thingy you got going on!
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~TheLaughingDreamer Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot
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~Hanachi-Shitsukki Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Unf I think this is absolutely amazing! The rhyming schemes are very poignant, and they remind me of Poe's theory that poetry is all about the sound - you really managed to get my attention the whole way through, and the story while very traditional and kept simple brings nice imagery to mind. Fav'd! ♥
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